Fire-1 Poem by VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

Fire-1

Rating: 5.0


Oh fire, oh fire, oh fire,
It was without you,
Cannot make and have a cup of hot coffee,
Although there are,
In taste, nothing better than you.

Oh fire, oh fire, oh fire,
It was without you,
Cannot cook or eat something hot,
Although there are!
In taste, nothing better than you.

Oh fire, oh fire, oh fire,
Sometimes, somewhere,
You are the most wanted in cremation.

Oh fire, oh fire, oh fire,
It was without you,
Cannot light the candle or lamp to god,

Oh fire, oh fire, oh fire,
It was without you,
Cannot weld or mould to make,
vessels or any other things.

Oh fire, oh fire, oh fire,
It was without you,
We can't enjoy fire camp,
Singing and dancing around you.

Oh fire, oh fire, oh fire,
It was without you,
We can't see the children,
Their smile and happiness
When bursting the crackers,
With beautiful colours in the sky.

Oh fire, oh fire, oh fire,
We were not allowed touch you,
If touched, you hurt us,
When water comes near to you,
We find, that you are vanished.

Friday, November 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: fire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ryson Dsouza 19 March 2017

Very well Expressed the Positive site, , , Lovely poem.... The usefulness and charm of the fire... A fire can also bring joy in our life is revealed in this.. Thanks for sharing.. You are an Amazing Poet...

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 27 November 2015

Verily, we always have a negative perspective for fire and do not ponder on the merits and usefulness. A lovely write.....10

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Shakil Ahmed 13 November 2015

yes, we need fire in every step of our life, you have painted the poem well with your thoughts, thanks for sharing.

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