Find Me Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Find Me

Rating: 4.8


Love,
its all turned quiet.
I recognize this place.
I've been here before
alone
in my room
crouched behind my closed doors
I am having a bit of trouble with myself.
you see... there are holes
and I fear
this storm will not cease its tormenting fury
please come back...
Love
you're the only one
who knows where I am hiding.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anong All 29 September 2005

Very vague your poem seams, to be.., l like poems with this kind of style..., says much., yet leave much to the reader.., as well...Nicely depth'd.. With Respect, Jodilee

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