Finally... Poem by Unwritten Soul

Finally...

Rating: 4.2


Finally you're back to me
Although for just to say goodbye
After years of silence
Now we can bury past in peace
At last here we are
Here we are

Finally i see you again
Although i never invited tears
After years of pain
Now we are healed and forgiving
Because before the wrong happened
Our start was beautiful
And will always be remembered as it was

So go to where your heart wants to
You know after years we've gone through
I always wanted the best for you
And you know deep in my heart, its true
Although after years of silence


I am glad to see you again
Although finally it is a moment to hear you to say goodbye
Although i never wanted to drop my tears again
But i am glad we bury all today

Finally
Finally lets move to somewhere new
To end the start with the same,
lasting and beautiful
Finally
We will going there...
Separately

Wednesday, March 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
recitation by me

It was about my close childhood friend, but somehow we never met again though in this poem i mentioned that we healed each other pain by forgiving...i mean i do forgive and i think my friend would do the same...just we never met again
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 08 March 2016

Outstanding poem. Friends are meant to forgive and forget....We take chances against them and commit mistakes deliberately to check the consequences and then reconcile easily....10+++

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 March 2016

This is such a sweet poem of emotions that are healed. There is no noble act greater than forgiveness. A big burden is released from the heart. Though you are going separate ways - you have tread on a spiritual path. God bless! So happy to give you a full 10.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2016

After years of silence. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Unwritten Soul 09 June 2016

Thanks Edward :)

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Christopher Tye 09 June 2016

Brilliant poem with lovely sentiments. We can never really guess where life's journey will take us so there are always final meetings which we do not know will be the last and something remain unsaid.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 March 2018

Finally Finally lets move to somewhere new To end the start with the same, lasting and beautiful Finally We will going there... Separately......... nice expression with meaningful theme. Beautiful poem on friendship and life. Thanks for sharing.

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Mj Lemon 15 September 2017

This verse is as elegant and vulnerable as silk. There's a sense of release and relief....and the opportunity to forge ahead. Great poem, Soul.

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Susan Williams 17 June 2017

You really hit the nail here, my dear. If only- -at the appropriate time in our life- -we would meet again those we once were close to but for various reasons have gone separate ways. It would be closure to actually say good-bye, wouldn't it? To feel that the love or the friendship was worth more than a sudden disappearance without a word said. To tell him or her they meant a lot at that time and how it would have been better for both him and yourself if he had left a good memory behind than shuffling away without a word. Vety well and wisely written, my friend.10+++++.

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Geetha Jayakumar 22 December 2016

Beautiful write Soul. Forgiveness is like removing heavy burden from our heart especially to move forward in life.Keep writing.

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Muhammad Ali 12 September 2016

A swim in the ocean of emotions. To dive and sink in such ocean.. is what I am saying 'a swim'! Beautiful thoughts

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