Filtrate Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Filtrate

Rating: 5.0


Brain, precaution and prevention,
Heart, hidden love a cure within us,
Man a blending, ethics and passion,
Age slaps one still immature within us.

Brain leads to God hard to ignore,
Belief his ally turns eyes to the heights,
Heart points to the waves that kiss the shore,
And to the birds that love during flights.

Brain asks to wash the dirt in the rains,
Heart says to live in rains one must die,
A little more dirt and a few more stains,
Brain stupid wise owl, always tells a lie.

Solvent and solutes insoluble,
Lovely neighbors but a bit quarrelsome,
The isosceles triangle is valuable,
As long as man is a poet, truly handsome!

Innocent poet, moderates and resolves,
A sweet lovely tweet and back to the nest,
Poet is a filter keeps beauty that dissolves,
Filtrate is the poem, he leaves the rest.

Rimes, the colors, thoughts and the flavor,
Music is fragrance makes the drink a delight,
When the reader is drunk and asks for on more!
A poet is accelerated with velocity of light!

Friday, November 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A true poetry is the filtrate and the rest is precipitate.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 30 November 2014

A true poet always tries to deliver Poems what readers may enjoy. When the readers enjoy and ask for more The poet is thrilled with joys galore........ very true, thanks for sharing

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 30 November 2014

Rightly said a true poetry is the filtrate and the rest is precipitate......I like the whole concept and the way you have presented it.....definitely this piece is a tribute to poetry.....Akhtarji, you are no doubt an amazing poet....10/10

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Salini Nair 30 November 2014

A poet is accelerated with velocity of light! .................awesome write....nicely crafted

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Valsa George 28 November 2014

Rimes, the colors, thoughts and the flavor, Music is fragrance makes the drink a delight, When the reader is drunk and asks for on more! A poet is accelerated with velocity of light! It is when the reader enjoys poetry and asks for more, that a poet is rewarded for his efforts! Enjoyed this poem glorifying poets and poetry!

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Khalida Bano Ali 28 November 2014

Beautiful, lovely and amazing...........10

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