Fieldtrip Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

Fieldtrip

Rating: 5.0


I was graduating in high school,
Our educational field trip was cool.
It was my first time to travel afar,
With classmates joyriding in a car.

A crush of mine was with us,
Sitting beside me inside the bus.
On each shoulder we laid to sleep,
As dear friends with love fairly deep.

But on mid-trip we were stranded,
Two tires suddenly had exploded.
Another ride we boarded outright,
Took slumber on the sets that night.

In front of me sat a fair dame,
Looks sweet inviting for a game.
Stared at me passing sexy tease,
Signaled seduction no tend to cease!

With opened legs the portal showed,
Shocked to where my eyes were glued!
Triggered an erectile of my young manhood,
To reached climactic ecstasy to where I stood!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Herbert Nehrlich1 09 May 2008

Marvin I have always liked your lack of inhibition and openness. This is an example of how poetry ought to read. H

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Ema Nekaf 20 June 2008

It's akwardly blunt! I love it!

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Ency Bearis 22 May 2008

Marvin is that coincidence of the flat tire or with consent to happen? I can feel what happened....ayos pare...biro lang. A -10.

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Original Unknown Girl 21 May 2008

What a serendipitous happening! The tyres being blown, I mean! Don't agree with David, clearly you both wanted it.... wonderful penning of events here Marvin. HG: -) xx

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David Desantis 21 May 2008

hahah that's a pretty sweet first time bro......lucky that you broke down.....he women are such hussies

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Melvin Banggollay 21 May 2008

ha ha ha dear brother another wonderful poem Its full of fun and wonderful scenes a 10 for that erectible poems. thanks, melvin

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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