Fields Of Green Velvet Poem by Valerie Dohren
Fields Of Green Velvet
Lay me down gently in fields of green velvet
Resting beneath the blue gossamer sky
Where I may gaze upon clouds of white cotton
Shimmering dragonflies floating on by
Mingling there amongst red satin petals
Yellow and silver, with gold all around
Captured by nature’s soft breathtaking beauty
Gracing the heavens, adorning the ground
There shall I tarry in peaceful devotion
Breathing the fresh and sweet pine-scented air
Feeling the warmth of the sun cast around me
Free from all worry and heartache and care
Come, won’t you join me, to feel all this splendour
There in your mind where such fantasies dwell
Dance with me, sing with me, and then surrender
Each of your cares, and fall under my spell
Song version (Music by John Carter Brown) :
https: //www.youtube.com/watch? v=Dq7FshhXuHw
I love this one Ruth. It has a very musical feel to it. If you don't mind, could I try setting it to a tune?
Fields of green velvet below and a blue gossamer sky above! What a lovely place to rest, free from all worry, heartache and care! Simply lovely! !
the imagery in this poem is beautiful Makes me want to lie down in fields of green velvet. love the write.
Wow Valerie fields of green Valerie must be a beautiful place to lie down. Your use of vivid colors really adds a sense of lightness and is very refreshing. I would like to relax like that. Nice.
Your beautiful, descriptive words of such beauty has me drifting there with you. I esp. loved your last stanza, being able to let go of all your cares~ if one dares! A very beautifully written poem, indeed. You always have what another does need.
Beautiful words in a Field of Green velvet. your writing is always extremely graceful
Breathtaking poem. the description is so vivid that the readers can feel that we are there with you.
Away from the fever and the fret of here and now...Really ecstatic....isn't it?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 5:55:56 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A serene and peaceful write with the comfort and splendour of nature's fields of green velvet! So beautiful Val!