Field Of Innocence Poem by Trinity Bella

Field Of Innocence

Rating: 5.0


Quiet.
Soft.
Full of peace.

No vandalism.
No wrong.
No sorrow.
No pain.

It's my field of innocence.
It's my life.
The place I dream about.
I know I am very young,
To early for me,
But when I pass.
I will go to this world.

Heaven,
Though, I like to call it field of innocence.
I don't know why.
Seemed fitting.
The innocent are there,
Resting in the quiet peace,
With our Lord Jesus.

I know someday I'll go,
And when I do,
I want to go to Heaven.
My Field Of Innocence.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
george george 01 December 2009

Nice poem Trinity! I like the beginning a lot: ' Quiet. Soft. Full of peace.' Good job.

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Tom Golding 04 December 2009

Good write. Keep with it, you are already a good writer you may only improve with practice and maturity. Good luck!

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Emilie DeVere 02 December 2009

Good poem! I like your interpretation of what Heaven is like. Keep writing!

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fantastic write.. keep the faith young one.

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Ivette T 01 December 2009

this sis a great poem hope to read more of you and through poems you always learn a little bit of the author

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John Knight 01 December 2009

Hi Bella - Great poem - great subject - great score I give it a TEN. Heaven is better than thisi - Oh my what Joy and Bliss Walking down the streets of solid Gold - living in a land were we'll never grow old Life down here with my LORD is fine - But Heaven is better than this! Any poem about Heaven is lovely. The Bible says it is a Place of Peace and Joy and Love and thee will be no sorrow and no pain. A Filed of Innocence (I like that description) . Becasue you have been BON AGAIN through Faith in Jesus - you have aplace in Heaven and real assurance deep in your lovely heart - AMEN. I like your assurance 'I know someday i'll go' - AWESOME. Don't worry Angel whether we are 12 or 112 al the Redeemed Ones are looking forward to Heaven and it makes our life in this old sinful World much much more bearable. Excellent Bella there are so many sad poems on Poemhunters - your Poems are a ray of Light and Truth. Love in Poetry - JOHN.

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