Fever Poem by Petra Creffield

Fever

Rating: 5.0


My temperature is rising
Anticipating the heat of you
Want you
Want you
On my skin
All over me
Deep within
Hold you there inside me
Refuse to let go
Until you release your heart
Surrender to this flow
This tide of me and you
See how far we can go
Take this chance
Take this risk
Be willing to get hurt
Yet again
Because love is the only answer I know

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Harris 08 March 2009

I liked the intensity and pure sexual tension of this fascinating poem, Petra. It was very expressive and quite well written and a frank statement of how one feels about the wonders of lovemaking. It was simple and direct, and in the end, quite eloquent because of that. Carl.

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