Feels Like... Poem by Karly Jaye

Feels Like...



Feels like I've been wating forever,
for the sun to rise,
for a chance again just to feel alive,
for something more out of this wasted life,
but every time I pray,
God closes his eyes.

Feel likes I've been waiting forever,
for a home to call mine,
for love to take over and free pain from my mind,
for a hand to hold that won't let go,
but every time I pray,
God only answers no.

Feels like I've been waiting forever,
for some life in these eyes,
for a heart that beats,
and isn't crippled by lies,
for a life worth living,
instead of wasting my time,
But every time I pray,
God is not on my side.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loyd C Taylor Sr 23 May 2014

Good morning poet Karly. Your poem seems hopeless, and sometimes we all feel this way. Feelings can be deceptive, for God does hear when we pray. I enjoyed, Loyd

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