Feelings: Contradicting Ideas, Passionate Mind Poem by Margaret Alice

Feelings: Contradicting Ideas, Passionate Mind

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Contradicting Ideas

In a love-hate relationship with the
Internet, for every beautiful thought
that elevates, ten dissenters appear
two sentences later

Bizarre ideas resonate with me, cold
facts are repelling; only small aspects
of truth can be discerned, I’m swayed
by everything

Creating an exciting life, creating havoc
never sure where I am or what I feel, but
committing to one alternative only
is not an option

I prefer weaving about in a sea of
contradicting ideas, rather than
end the journey with one viewpoint
only, safely in port

For me, the journey is everything!


Passionate Mind

Only challenges make life worthwhile
I love excitement and wild adrenalin
an office job, a quiet suburban life
can’t keep me occupied - quite clear

it is an act to appear sane, bohemian
spirit masquerading under middle-class
respectability, covering inner turmoil
with urban veneer, trying to cut out

ungainly parts of my passionate mind
like a Cinderella only fitting the shoe
once her feet are cut down to size…

Though rebellion is cut away, the quest
for meaning goes on, one day I hope to
settle down and be calm like you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Taylor 25 January 2008

Enjoyed this one Margaret, one of your best (IMHO) thank you from David

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Anita Atina 25 January 2008

I just loved this poem Margaret, the thought, the pace, the words just came together so well. Great work! Cheers, Anita

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Margaret Alice

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Pretoria - South Africa
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