Feelings After Long Paper Poem by masarapu navyasree
Feelings After Long Paper
iam so sad
to face my dad
he insist me to get first
and swear that
he will give me a hake to eat
but i not even deserve for the cake that i ate
i was hale at once
but i became pale and tense
i became dull and null
i got fear to hear about my peer
i thought it would be pace to my success
but i ever imagined that my face would be pale
when i know my marking i was lurking
full of confusion that led to my tension
my pronunciation was as cub
owing to commotion
i will come to nub
that it's all of my examination
A great start with a nice poem, masarapu. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
you have composed an outstanding poem. keep it up with your study. You r more responsible. B fearless and go ahead. God will help u.
Conspicuously expressed feelings. Sublime. Although do keep sentences at similar length and begin with a capital letter. Just general grammatical requirements, nevertheless very good write. Williams, T.
believe its simple poem..coz dont wanna good poet worry for marks....easy...well that shows u wanna be more sincere n responsible...good! :)
Good.... Expressed your feelings clean n clear.... Keep writing many more...
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I would like to translate this poem
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fine, , , , , , , , stand to the expectation of ur dad