Feeling Normal Poem by Savita Tyagi

Feeling Normal

Rating: 5.0


A heart ache surfaced upon from a sleepy memory
And a warm tear shed in silence wetted my cheeks.

In darkness life stirred and I felt wide awake
But the rough remembrance didn't last long.

Like a wave it receded after drenching the shore
To my surprise its after effect brought a strange joy.

The emotional sensation was poignant in dead of night
As of a dry earth with rain shower that comes alive.

I absorbed and felt the soft touch of an emotion
It caressed and left like a passing breeze.

I am alive not because I breathe but because I feel.

Living life with an empty desolate mind is
Like a brain dead patient moving upon wheel.

World is charming when we are healthy enough
To feel in heart the effect of its joy and pain.

It took a little memory to jolt me back
From a physical and mental stupor.

Life is beautiful with all its bumps and bruises
Lose not a moment to recognize this paradise.

5.11.2015

Monday, May 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,feelings
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
For some time I have been out and away from poetry world for various reasons. I also realized how much I missed writing and how acute is my awareness of not being able to come up with some thing worth posting. Here is a fresh attempt on writing after a long time.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 13 May 2015

Life is beautiful with all its bumps and bruises Lose not a moment to recognize its grandiose.........Really, beautiful description. A beautiful and meaningful poem. Many thanks dear madam, may God bless you and your family. .......10

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Tushar Ray 11 May 2015

Beautiful poem Savita! We live To feel in heart the effect of its joy and pain. I am alive not because I breathe but because I feel Thanks for sharing this poem. Tushar Ray

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