Feelin Weak Poem by Emi Raye

Feelin Weak



When I'm feelin weak
You give me wings
When the fire has no heat
You light it up again
When I hear no violins
You play my every string

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Troy Clark 22 April 2008

This is a nice peice you have here! I like the word play

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Howard Johnson 21 April 2008

Excellent word flow, and a pleasure to read.

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