Feel Me Poem by Bharati Nayak
Feel Me
Is it too cold in your place?
Does cold wind bite your body?
Has there been snow fall in front of your house?
Touch the snow and
Feel me in the snow melting
Between your fingers.
Does your pet cat
Move around you
Seeking your warm touch?
Then stroke her head and
See, I am there.
You are walking in your lawn
Grasses are bending to touch your feet
You pick a blade of grass absentmindedly
Perhaps I am there
In that tiny grass blade.
You are walking in the open
A soft breeze blows across
Feel me in the breeze
Caught in your ruffled hair.
A shaft of golden light
Falls on your verandah
You draw a chair to the yellow light
And sit there
to read morning newspaper
Feel me dear
when a sunny warmth hugs you.
Bharati Nayak
when you are dancing in the morning dawn says come now feel me when you are dancing in the afternoon sun says it's her dancing zenith then in the evening again we feel the cool breeze and as sun sets you warm all your dancing now beats like heavenly drums you have a new Nritya begun dum duma dum and now snow comes warm up BN
The way of expressing love with a warm touch is beautiful." Feel me dear when a sunny warmth hugs you" - highly emotional
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Does your pet cat Move around you Seeking your warm touch? Then stroke her head and See, I am there. A poem, so warm, affectionate and full of emotion. Beautifully penned Bharati.....10
What a beautiful way to say love and remember you, I'm sure you also! If so, check out this check list. Lovely. Full marks.
A wonderful example of a 'you' poem that draws in your readers to the speaker. I think we are all connected with one another through nature, through our everyday lives.
Thank you Pamela Sinicrope for your wonderful comment.It is so nice to see you on my page after a long time.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 10:38:57 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Nature has its own beauty.....so beautifully crafted Mam....thanks for sharing....
Thank you Abhipsa Panda for your appreciation.