Mihaela Pirjol

Fears - Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Fears in heart, fears in mind,
For them reason I can't find;
Fears in love and of unknown
Of the wind and what may blow;
Sleepless nights covered in worry
For myself I feel so sorry.

Random thoughts irrational
Chase my thoughts exhaustible,
Some of them with no substance,
In some others, feel the absence
Of someone with whom to share
This aching fear; it's so unfair!

A warm embrace, a gentle touch,
To mine heart would mean so much;
To assure and wash fears away
Leaving place for brighter day;
Yet, my pillow only knows my fears,
In secret silence, absorbing tears.

Topic(s) of this poem: fears, loneliness

Form: Sestet

Comments about Fears by Mihaela Pirjol

  • Silver Star - 3,141 Points Shahin Latif (10/26/2015 3:07:00 PM)

    I love this poem. It's well narrated. A lot of thanks dearest poet Mihaela Pirjol. (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,297 Points Georgios Venetopoulos (10/21/2015 2:10:00 PM)

    It is a beautiful and deep poem! Bravo Mihaela! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 42,093 Points Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/7/2015 2:27:00 PM)

    This fear deserves all applause.............rightly selected poem of the day as well a place in journal. I liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,393 Points Melvina Germain (9/20/2015 9:08:00 PM)

    All around so so true...Excellent poem..... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 47,517 Points Edward Kofi Louis (6/11/2015 3:26:00 AM)

    Yes, there are fears in all the sectors of life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,931 Points Daniel Brick (3/30/2015 11:37:00 AM)

    I remember last February when this was the Poem Of The Day, I sent you a congratulations message and it didn't deliver! Nor did my comment on the poem. But PH seems to have fixed the system. Hurray! // This poem is so probing - it uncovers so many dimensions of heartbreak - and almost in the middle is the heart's eternal lament:
    IT'S SO UNFAIR. But there no tribunal to hear the case of a broken heart and restore justice. We are bereft. And your poem clearly understands this and yet will not be silent. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,137 Points Mihaela Pirjol (2/15/2015 7:47:00 AM)

    To me Feb 10 at 9: 27 AM
    Dear Poet;

    We chose your Fears poem as 'Poem of The Day from A Member' and on 2/10/2015 it will be sent to all 'MemberPoem Bulletin' members.

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  • Gold Star - 30,928 Points Sandra Feldman (2/10/2015 3:37:00 PM)

    Fears are worse when you're alone,
    Take you to a fearful zone.
    We can feel the anguish, that you feel,
    So well expressed and written too!
    Congratulations, thru and thru. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,098 Points Savita Tyagi (2/10/2015 2:08:00 PM)

    Great poem with wonderful rhythm. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,125 Points Kim Barney (2/10/2015 7:45:00 AM)

    Much better than the other two Poems of the Day.
    Congratulations! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 51,039 Points Chinedu Dike (12/25/2014 5:28:00 AM)

    Fear is a bunch of sinister shadows, a shadow has no substance, it's usually only a magnified reflection of something small. That's why in standing boldly up to fear you often find it inconsequential. I like the articulation and insight of the poem. Thanks for sharing and merry Christmas. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 4, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 29, 2015

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