Tiana Webb

Rookie - 3 Points (March 19th 1997 / Tumut)

Fear - Poem by Tiana Webb

Shadows in the dark
They're keeping me awake
So I sleep with the light on
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Comments about Fear by Tiana Webb

  • Rookie - 677 Points Muzaffer Akin (6/26/2014 4:33:00 PM)

    Congratulations...I like it very much. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,043 Points Michelle Claus (6/26/2014 12:14:00 PM)

    The final two lines make me curious - Who is the *you* whom the poet fears? This one word sends my mind into back-story, conjuring reasons for the poet's nightmares. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 37 Points Colleen Courtney (6/26/2014 12:12:00 PM)

    Love the line, silence can be deadly, especially at night! Nicely written poem! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 900 Points Leslie Philibert (6/26/2014 3:34:00 AM)

    Good work, the theme not new, but well written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Malini Kadir (6/28/2012 2:15:00 AM)

    how true, .........death....in nightmares can really frighten daylights from you...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Malini Kadir (6/28/2012 2:15:00 AM)

    how true, .........death....in nightmares can really frighten daylights from you...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 740 Points Kaila George (6/27/2012 11:39:00 PM)

    Dont you hate it when Fear stops in your tracks....very true when it comes to this one word...Its a delicate subject and your wrote it beautiful...thanks for the share. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Besa Dede (6/26/2012 11:41:00 AM)

    Good narration :))
    Regards,
    ~Besa (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Shouvik Roy (6/26/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    Wow, wonderful portrayal of an acute emotion..great write.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Alafe Ramat (6/26/2012 9:27:00 AM)

    Whao! ...dt's so amazing..lv ow u tel abt d tale...grt work (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,786 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (6/26/2012 2:19:00 AM)

    Fantastic the finishing hit. Smooth the speed to touch its catastrophe. Nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 222 Points Adam Mckim (3/25/2012 10:56:00 PM)

    ah, the nightmares. I've had them just as you described here. (Report) Reply










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