! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Fear! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Kuji soliman

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Fear! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 3.3


the feeling i hate the most
the feeling i have most of the time,
that feeling is the worst
it's like a bell's shime,
inside the head of the person that feels FEAR!

fear,
makes all the darkness appear,
it feels like noone's here,


No laughter, no smiles
no happiness, no succes

fear, what a horrible feeling,
a feeling that shakes the seeling
it's so strong
it's also so wrong!

who wants to live in the darkness of fear?
soon, if everyone is scared, the humains will disapear,
who knows what's next?
God only could complete this text...

(thankyou for reading my poem, enjoy)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Omar Ibrahim 28 March 2009

i liked the last line the most! ! ! ! ! ! (god only--) this poem caught my fancy..great job.

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Merna Ibrahim 29 May 2009

I like this poem so much and i agree with Omar that the last line is great (God only.....) ......keep it up! ! Merna

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Zeinab Sherif 23 July 2009

very, very well dear it is wonderful & it proves that u r intelligent.10+++

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Nagwa Osman 01 December 2009

i like this poem so much and i agree withOmar and Merna. thank u for giving me a chance to read your poem.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 21 September 2009

Only thing to fear is fear itself........well done............

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Patrick A. Martin 18 September 2009

Fear has a purpose Kuji if we did not feel it we would not seek faith.10

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Carol Gall 18 September 2009

good poem on fear well written

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Rachel Butler 16 September 2009

God only could complete this text... Rachel Ann Butler

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