Fear Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Fear

Rating: 5.0


Walking down
the lonely road
You look
to the left
to the right
Lookout for
snipers
Between the thin line
of life
and death
you'd never know
who you really
are

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ro'ya Abdulaal 02 September 2009

Isn’t that what we all feel at some point in our lives, fear holds us back and fills our hearts. “Who you really are? ” no one will ever know that. Very touching, small but meaningful.

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Madison Yeater 01 January 2009

great! sigh... maybe..we all have trouble finding who we really are sometimes..

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Linda Weischedel 21 August 2008

Great poem, great truth! ! ! !

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Malini Kadir 08 June 2008

Fear that will sense less paralyze you........between the thin line of birth and death And you will never know who you really are..............I loved this absolute truth in your lines

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