S.zaynub Kamoonpuri


Fauna's Lost And Found! - Poem by S.zaynub Kamoonpuri

To purses of leather
one lost its skin
One lost its feather
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Im an animal lover :)

Comments about Fauna's Lost And Found! by S.zaynub Kamoonpuri

  • Rookie - 252 Points Rafique Farooqi (5/15/2015 10:24:00 AM)

    Your amaizing words are heart touching giving sensation of life to numbness. (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,171 Points Bharati Nayak (5/9/2015 10:31:00 AM)

    How do you return a severed tusk to the elephant?
    Fur to the lynx cat?
    Skinned skin to the python?
    Or ripped feathers to the peacock?
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    Shoot them with cameras
    Instead of through guns- - - - Excellent write on violence against animals. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,831 Points Kelly Kurt (4/3/2015 7:50:00 PM)

    Thank you for bringing this issue to the forefront through your wonderful poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 28,224 Points Akhtar Jawad (3/23/2015 6:07:00 AM)

    Peep through binoculars
    instead of through guns
    Shoot 'em' with cameras
    instead of weapons
    O' hunters shun hunting
    with darned shotguns!
    Amazing message, amazing poem................10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,999 Points Fabrizio Frosini (12/26/2014 10:33:00 AM)

    Shoot 'em' with cameras
    instead of weapons

    HOW TRUE! nicely written lines (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,615 Points Geetha Jayakumar (10/31/2014 10:58:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem touching indeed. Great message.....
    Still how do you restore
    this lost and found to their rightful owners?

    Each lines are beautifully portrayed. very true said, How do you return a severed tusk to the elephant? It's not possible to return back the lost after finding it. No one can fix it back. In this case even if found it's of no use. The damage is already done. Lost is lost forever.

    Very well deserved poem of the day! Congrats. Superb write. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,947 Points Savita Tyagi (10/20/2014 2:40:00 PM)

    This poem touched my heart. A strong message delivered here with excellent poetic skills. So glad to read it as member poem. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,652 Points John Richter (10/20/2014 7:51:00 AM)

    Bravo for unleashing your emotions. That is what poetry thrives upon. Unfortunately fashion trends come and go. Today it is more the poacher than the game hunter to fear. Killing a 2,000 pound rhino for just a few ounces of ground dust from it's horn is absolutely atrocious. Things like this should remain in the forefront of the public's minds. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,060 Points Lyn Paul (10/20/2014 4:23:00 AM)

    great WORDS. What is to be left of the worlds beauty. Thank You (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/20/2014 3:32:00 AM)

    The poetess my sister is a poetess to save the earth and its habitat..Vampire is a fantastic poem that also hope displayed over here as Poem of The Day from a Member..congrats Zaynub need more from you thank you (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,921 Points Babatunde Aremu (10/20/2014 3:21:00 AM)

    There's no way to fix a severed tusk of an elephant. A well focused poem with rare theme. A lot of lesssons to be learnt. Kudos to this poet (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,602 Points Md Asadullah (10/20/2014 1:26:00 AM)

    Congrats sister! This is poem of the day and it deserves to be,10/10 :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 617 Points John Sky Dadzie (10/11/2014 5:51:00 PM)

    Nice poem and tanx for your complement on my poem the fishermen's song.i also love animals. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,922 Points Soulful Heart (7/4/2014 1:57:00 AM)

    Shoot the poachers indeed that devastate the rights of living.......................A really laudable poem for the most pathetic state of cause prevalent throughout the world...... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,566 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/16/2014 6:08:00 PM)

    A compelling and courageous cry to protect those who cannot protect themselves. Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,144 Points Majid Zubedi (10/20/2013 6:58:00 AM)

    a nice poem with a good message, especially the closing stanza is excellent...congratulations for selecting your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,742 Points Wahab Abdul (10/20/2013 12:45:00 AM)

    wow! fantastic, and congratulations for being selected as poem of the Day..kudos to you... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (5/20/2013 10:57:00 AM)

    Clouds of feelings wow lovely one (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,367 Points Bri Edwards (12/6/2012 7:44:00 PM)

    thanks for sharing. i came here after reading your comment to my poem about doubting the king big head. HIS head would make a good trophy don't you think? ? seriously though, while i was a conservation major before dropping out of college AND as a boy i cried when i accidentally killed a sparrow with an arrow, i don't feel comfortable damning all hunting, especially in light of the yummy meats and fishes my wife prepares for us. of course it DOES seem a waste if an elephant is just pilfered for tusks and not eaten. and poachers are a bit different than regular hunters? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points isam Abdelrahman (11/15/2012 9:33:00 AM)

    A fine piece of poem; high humane feelings; loved it (Report) Reply










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