Tom Higgins

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Fatty Bum Bum - Poem by Tom Higgins

How did I end up in this state?
I'm always fighting with my weight,
I'd like to put it down to fate,
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Comments about Fatty Bum Bum by Tom Higgins

  • Skyrone Scorpio Skyrone Scorpio (5/2/2014 10:57:00 AM)

    Hi there Tom, you are onto something special here, I know this so I will be looking...Bless. and keep up the great work. (Report) Reply

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  • Paul Sebastian Paul Sebastian (5/2/2014 3:38:00 AM)

    Hi Tom,
    A beautiful poem on submission. You are honest about your goal and you have told it openly in this poem.
    A good write! (Report) Reply

  • Birgitta Abimbola Heikka Birgitta Abimbola Heikka (5/1/2014 8:38:00 PM)

    Nice catchy title. Loved your poem of honesty. Very revealing and honest. (Report) Reply

  • Michelle Claus Michelle Claus (5/1/2014 12:31:00 PM)

    Your poem makes us chuckle, and we also empathize. (Report) Reply

  • Katelin Taylor Katelin Taylor (5/1/2014 11:37:00 AM)

    Cute and I like the repeated last line of each stanza. Very nicely done. (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (5/1/2014 9:31:00 AM)

    Wonderfully amusing poem. A light heart will sure take couple of ounces away from my fat! Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Connie Yost Connie Yost (5/1/2014 7:26:00 AM)

    I wish you the best of luck in your honest efforts and hope to see another poem from you one day soon, which you have named, just Call Me Slim! (Report) Reply

  • Leslie Philibert (5/1/2014 3:20:00 AM)

    Witty write indeed. If you like modern poetry you may enjoy my work, which has recently been published in magazines in the US and Canada (Report) Reply

  • Eva Arc (5/1/2013 9:00:00 PM)

    Really modern and up-to- date (Report) Reply

  • R.j. Wynn (5/1/2013 10:48:00 AM)

    And here I thought I was yhe only one. (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee Jasbir Chatterjee (5/1/2013 3:52:00 AM)

    I like the +ve outlook in this poem... (Report) Reply

  • Jayne Davies Jayne Davies (5/1/2013 1:07:00 AM)

    Great poem! Well done! Feel free to read my poem titled Willpower, I know how hard it is x
    All the best! (Report) Reply

  • Walterrean Salley (5/1/2012 7:39:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem. Beautifully written. Great contents. You can do it. Wish you the best. (Report) Reply

  • Latisha Barker Latisha Barker (5/1/2012 3:50:00 PM)

    I like this poem and i could relate to what you're talking about. i am trying to do the exercise thing myself, but it is definitely not easy. (Report) Reply

  • Latisha Barker Latisha Barker (5/1/2012 3:46:00 PM)

    I like this poem, and i could relate to what you're talking about. I'm trying to do the exercise thing myself, but boy, it is not easy and that's honest (smile) . (Report) Reply

  • Ella Kiely (5/1/2012 3:26:00 PM)

    This poem put a smile on my face. You made it funny while you were owning up to what you have done.
    Luv it
    X (Report) Reply

  • Roongratt Srimanchantha Roongratt Srimanchantha (5/1/2012 9:14:00 AM)

    Wow..I love this one Tom, you've made me laugh! ! (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson Heather Wilson (4/11/2012 3:05:00 PM)

    Good for you, you owned up as you wrote up, now your going to tone up. (Report) Reply

  • Martin O'Neill Martin O'Neill (3/10/2012 8:37:00 AM)

    I have to admit, I really cheesed off the doctor when in hospital recently. They suspected (Wrongly - Hooray!) something unnecessarily unpleasant.
    Have you lost any weight recently, Mr O'Neill?
    No idea, I never weigh myself.
    Ooh! she said.
    Go to the Phillipines. I said.
    End smile. (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine Diane Hine (3/5/2012 4:25:00 PM)

    Love the title, good luck! (Report) Reply










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