Fatherless Child. Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

Simple but effective in getting your message across

short but very good, ., ., i love simple stuff the best

I loved the positivity in the lines: fatherless child, i know one day you will smile. CP

i like the optimism you've marked in the last line..nice..!

thats reli good. i completely understand what your going thro and it makes the poem seem like its coming from somewhere dep in my head which i normally try to forget about. thats a reli deep poem. wel done :)

An economy of words heightens the impact of this touching write.

This poem is really touchin........I LOVE it! !

Endearing childlike simplicity in the phrasing. Well done.

With a format like this, It is easy to do too much. You did a great job with succint phrasing. =]

that was a great poem..i liked it alot..and the poem just flowed very nicely