Father Poem by Eddy Van Vliet

Father

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Father. Undress yourself. While you still may.
Show me what time has scarred
since we sat in the bath together and I proved
that waterdrops want to touch one another.

Fear not. We have similar structures.
Legs, back, nails and countless gestures.

I do not want to wait for twenty-seven more years
and see how hyperpigmentation
spreads, skin slackens and
veins burst.

Show me what is left when you make
love no more.
Recount names of women and let us
roar and resign.

Translated by John van Tiel

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 31 July 2018

I do not want to wait for twenty-seven more years and see how hyperpigmentation spreads, skin slackens and veins burst..........touching expression. Beautiful poem shared.

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Mahtab Bangalee 31 July 2018

nice and interesting poem- //// I do not want to wait for twenty-seven more years and see how hyperpigmentation spreads, skin slackens and veins burst. /// enjoyed it

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 July 2018

Show me what is left when you make love no more. Recount names of women and let us roar and resign....a very good poem. tony

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Adrian Flett 31 July 2018

'roar and resign' is what we all do ultimately.

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 31 July 2018

Wow! So much to red between lines. Thanks for sharing the thought provoking poem.

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Rajnish Manga 31 July 2019

An unconventional generational shift in father son relationships. Even if it was never expressed, it reflects the change in mood and approach. Thanks a lot.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 31 July 2019

A emotions packed touching yet in a way most intriguing poem.Thus, a modern poem of the day, perhaps.

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 July 2019

Show me what is left when you make love no more. Recount names of women and let us roar and resign. a very good poem. tony

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 July 2019

More than roar we resign at the end of the poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 July 2019

This poem ' Father.' is a beautiful poem by Eddy Van Vliet written before his death.

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