Far Off Neighbor Poem by Jahan Zeb

Far Off Neighbor

Rating: 5.0


The world has entered a social age,
But we the two,
Races tribes and religions,
Feel pleased in others defeat,
Nothing to share nothing to celebrate,
No humor but ridicule,
Want not to be a platform,
Easily a hindrance though,
count you gains,
How many?
None?
Now take these losses,
No space to place them,
too many,
children orphan,
Women widowed,
mothers crying,
Sisters mourning brothers,

Enough you two,
Enough,
Your children deserve to be friends,
Teach them love,
The enmity ends,
Practice your religions,
Celebrate,
Customs and feasts,
But be the neighbors,
For each other,
A shelter, safety, support and helper….

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The title has its own story. Physically we two countries, Pakistan and India, are neighbors but the people of the two countries have gone away from each other. They should be stopped.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 03 November 2012

Teaching in poetry is more freedom than an advice shape..thus i think this is the best method...and you are using it for love to teach love for all by a pen_Soul

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Indranil Bhaduri 06 November 2012

Neighbours are meant to help each other, provide support in distress..I wish the two great nations understand the same. We all are human beings made of the same red blood and having a heart inside. Hats off to you sir!

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Saadat Tahir 04 November 2012

lovely lines.....mirroring the common destiny of nation neighbors. yes...wdnt it...cdnt it....be so much better for the helpless trodden morass of humanity heaped high liked.... sat

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The Reader 05 November 2012

wonderful write with wonderful comments advocating the need for wonderful relations b/w the 2 countries.

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very true indeed, it is actually an evolution, that none would have predicted, wonderful write, very well structured The_African_Son

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Unwritten Soul 10 December 2012

Ah i wish India and Pakistan never be that far....by hands and hearts...different faiths and race not a barrier to be one. Maybe the history a bit hurt from past but for future is the time we will live, so do it better for both and for all countries..we are one, you maybe different as they too but nothing is same, that is how unique for each person, race and nation is...but truly we are in one nation of earth but in different big district call countries...no barriers just love_Soul

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 08 December 2012

heart touching sir..... well written, keep us motivated with many more wonderful pieces.....

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Kanav Justa 30 November 2012

if everyone could think like you, , , ,

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Yash Shinde 06 November 2012

really the partition of india was the greatest abrasion that india faced...............very truthful and powerful write :)

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Srijeeta Manna 06 November 2012

wonderful thought.i wish every individual thought this way.

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