Far Far... Poem by Saeid Hadavand

hi there you started very well here immeditaerly caught my attention but down the middle lost the thread and wraped it up as best as possible under such circumstances its best to deliver a shoryter sharper message and not force youself or your pen this is not a discouragement... just my views..poetry is tooo vast a canvas for us to limit cheers

great poem that has a very great rhythm..good job....

Good write dear Poet

You are similar to Omar Khayyam! truly poetic and expressive! amazing poem!

Awesome poem. Loved it. CP

life's like a chess game but i have a no name! .. the king with the broken heart... he is not the king... she is the queen... -- for my best friend. with the best wishes... be careful of your self my heart.

Repetation of Far Far has added melody to this poem. It is a lovey poem.

I really like the concept of your poem and you have been very philosophical in your approach to it. You have used the repetition of Far Far really well. Good work. Top marks Karin Anderson

Interesting write. So long as you donn't get 'check mate' life is taken in strides. Good write.

An interesting poem, keep writing.