Far Away Poem by R. Ariffin

Far Away

Rating: 3.5


The sun is cold and pale and sick
The sky is silent with dark emotion
Time has become an entity of almost non exist
Torturing this feeling of forlorn and unfulfilled devotion

The wind is piercing and tearing the soul
The sound of the ocean is deafening
Thunders gently whisper in your tranquil sleep
Calling out to you that my heart is burning

The sea is sour and bitter and black
The color of all things beautiful has become grey
My heart shivers, shattered and wrecked
Lost and dumbfounded everytime you're far away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris G. Vaillancourt 14 October 2009

A compelling and enjoyable read.

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Patti Masterman 09 October 2009

This is so exquisite. I can't believe how people can write like this; and yet it happens occasionally..thanks.

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R. Ariffin

R. Ariffin

Johor, Peninsular Malaysia
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