Fantasy World Poem by louis rams

Fantasy World

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living in this fantasy world
where whatever you thought of
'you could do.'
and all your dreams would follow you.'

if you dreamt of all the riches in the world
you would start off with a pearl.
then the beauties of the diamonds
rubies, sapphires and emeralds
would all follow suit.
silver and gold to boot.

you could go into any career that you want
whether it was a doctor, lawyer, scientist
or even a gymnast you could do.
it all depended upon you.

there are so many options in this fantasy world
to do, or become whatever your heart would desire.
but! it still would not put out the fire.

most all of these are material things
but love 'it could not bring'.
it could not give you what was
truely in your heart and soul.
and that was 'someone for you to hold.'

the heart and soul is together like a mother
and a child
and they'll be together for a very long while.
treat them gently, treat them with care
then all your wonders, they will share.
they'll show you all the emotions
that come in this life
from heartaches to struggles and strife.

the most important feelings that
the heart and soul will show
is the love that will flourish and grow.
this you will not find in your fantasy world
for love is much richer
than your diamonds and pearls.

love grows from deep within your heart and soul
the most glorious wonder to behold.
so step out of that fantasy world and
come into the light
that will take you on the most fantastic flight.

you will see what all others have discovered
that for you, there is a lover.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deborah Cromer 29 August 2009

Ah! The love of my life, my perfect treasure. The love is sacred and precious, truly priceless. Nothing valuable and expensive could ever match the true love feeling. I am loved and I am Queen. I have his touch and this is my kingdom. Our hearts together and we become the richest souls in the world. I love your poem. You know what you are writing about. Great work. You write of one of the greatest treasures there is. Good job. Excellent. DC

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~ Jon London ~ 30 August 2009

No one could have written it better by friend....LIFE! ! ..........so many truths stem from this one word...........great penning louis

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dr veenaa rai 30 August 2009

love is life...true indeed! wonderful poem.

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this si a fantactic world.. my Love......... is Christ.........................he completes my world, such that.. i do not fight for these fantasies. i relax and let his will be granted in me.. so much do that im worry free

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Kranthi Pothineni 29 August 2009

The initial tour of your fantasy world made me to wonder what this poem will be. Friend you had themed a very important message in a beautiful and creative way.Its a charming write.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 29 August 2009

a priceless thing love. .you have it within you you search for it in the ricches all around you A WONDERFUL TRIBUTE TO LOVE ITSELF...10

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