Fantasy Poem by diana rose tolentino

Fantasy

Rating: 4.4


In the prairie down the hill,
I can see the grass so green.
With cascaded flowers everywhere,
And their fragrances fill the air.

As I walk as gentle as the breeze,
Try not to harm life beneath my feet,
Daisies, sweet peas and daffodils,
And crown of laurels in my head.

I felt the wind gently blew my hair,
While dandelions dance in gay.
A big smile painted colors in my face,
As I watch them with such grace.

The feeling just took my breath away,
Surely a place beyond compare.
An honor to be on this blessed soil,
The refuge for any weary soul.

I heard the birds singing just as sweet.
Their hymns lull me back to sleep.
Serene and peace I wont forget,
As I laid my head to rest.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelvin Owusu 18 September 2013

a wonderful write, this would be great as a bed time story

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Crimson Love 06 October 2011

very beautiful poem I enjoyed it thoroughly :)

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Wahab Abdul 17 September 2013

sweet poem..written with craft, love it..

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 September 2013

Fabulous and enchanting poem and imagery.

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Ramesh Rai 08 October 2013

fantastic write. a beautiful poem. enjoyed it.

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Sarah Shahzad 23 December 2019

I absolutely love this poem..! nicely penned with good use of words.

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Akhtar Jawad 17 July 2018

May be a fantasy but I love when fantasies become a fact.

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Chinedu Dike 14 June 2017

Rich flow of thought with captivating images. A pleasing write-up. Thanks for sharing.

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Wilma De Guzman 12 August 2016

I love how you painted your writing colorfully! !

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Heather Wilkins 09 October 2013

a good poem of fantasy. nice ink

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