Fantasy Poem by Lina Depina

Fantasy

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Close your eyes and picture a clear blue sky. the two of us walkin leavin our footsteps behind.

I look into your eyes and you bend down and tell me you love me. that was one of my fantasy that did come true.

But the best part of my fantasy was finding you. threw many of dreams and lies that i been threw. finding u completed part of my fantasy.

Lina Depina
Thursday, December 25, 2008
poem poems Fantasy Eyes Lies blue sky Dreams
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Greenwolfe 1962 01 February 2009

I like the fact that you don't repeat yourself. You keep it short and clear. A fine job. The readers are with you. GW62

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Keith Hendrickson 09 January 2009

THE LAST LINES MAKE THIS A GREAT PIECE.

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Arik Carpenter 08 January 2009

i love the way you worded this

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 25 December 2008

A true fantasy.......Well worded.

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