Fancy Poem by Heather Burns

Fancy

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Fancy
here you come
again
under a harvest
moon

I sense your
nearness
am I correct?

the feeling
remains
you
walked away
each separate
paths taken

fancy
your face still
lights up my
night.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 02 August 2013

Beautiful Fancy indeed... Good poem.. Loved reading it. Dear Hither, I seek your Blessings on my completion of 100 poems..Thank you.

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Teddy Opundo 02 August 2013

Fancy fancy, well written, Great

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 02 August 2013

Your face's the harvest moon. Beautifully expressed in the poem. Thank you.

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Neela Nath Das 02 August 2013

Very soothing and heart warming.

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Hazel Durham 02 August 2013

Evocative and moving with beautiful lines! Great write!

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Valerie Dohren 04 August 2013

Very sweet Heather - fanciful in fact.

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David Wood 03 August 2013

Fond memories last the longest.

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Valsa George 03 August 2013

It is during nights that fancy comes to visit us! Soft like the falling of a thistledown!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 02 August 2013

Inspiring beautiful poem told crisply!

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Lucifera Santez 02 August 2013

as i have always said, creation of a genius. fancy your face still lights up my night. my favorite lines. again a gem of first water. :)

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