Falling Part Iii Poem by Sarah Gray

Falling Part Iii



Falling part III

I want to stop
I want to land
I want to see
My life expand

I am falling yet again
I look down and I see them
Staring up at what is coming
They are just looking and not running

I wonder why they will not move
They must think they have nothing to prove
They should learn why to go
Out from under and below.

With all their eyes fixed on me
I almost forget to breathe.
I should not forget to focus on
The fact that I am almost gone.
Poof, I am gone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jolenish Fiber 01 May 2008

you are learning quite a lesson right now aren't you? i've read all of your falling poems and this is the best. you are expanding and getting b etter at exzpressing this subject. keep exploring how you feel about it. keep writing.

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Sarah Gray

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