Falling Free Poem by Kris Rozz

Falling Free

Rating: 2.7


Had we touched
the blue sea
at indigo dusk, entwined
faded moonlight's decree,
shaded from sunlight
our stars falling free.

Sunday, May 31, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sara Tehrani 31 May 2009

beautifully written. normally i dont like really short poems but i think its coz its harder to write and make an impact and entertain the reader with so few words, so weldone. i like this poem, coz it could mean so many different things, like either feeling regret for not doing sumthing or questioning where you stand with someone and what stage in a relationship your at. is any of them right?

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