Fallen Tree. Poem by Darlyn Castillejo

Fallen Tree.

Rating: 4.8


This sadness creeps on to me
As I sit here all alone
Watching my life fall apart
Loosing the trust and hope
I once had, but look at me now
I'm full of doubts and hate.

This day will be my last
So pray for me so I can rest in peace, but I will be watching over the and all, until my spirt is washed away for good then I will perish and find the path to lay deep in the ground rising as a fallen tree....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lungelo S Mbuyazi 26 November 2017

Oh! Such anguish, lost and regrets feelings are all but expressed. Thanks for sharing. You may like to rate my poems: The Fallen Tree and Cry My Tears Cry Thanks

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Saadat Tahir 05 October 2012

Started off on diffrnt note And it is allegorical strongly expressive of the envirnmntl malaise Nice...liked

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Neela Nath Das 04 October 2012

What an entrance! Lovely poem.Thanks for sharing.

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Romeo Della Valle 03 October 2012

WELCOME! To the Poetry World dear Darlyn! What a way to enter into this wonderful World poetry with this sad but very touching write (Your first) well crafted and poignant! Hope and Faith are the key of a bright future, especially for a young girl like you! Let it all out of your chest through writing since you have the talent! Keep it up! Let's us all hear more from you dear Darlyn! 10+++ God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

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Indranil Bhaduri 03 October 2012

So heart touching emotional piece...

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