Fallen Poem by Vivek Haldar

Fallen

Rating: 4.7


I am the one who has fallen in your eyes,
O! God I have fallen from your world,
I was the one who went away from you,
and i now i have lost everything;
So, many curses still bewitching me,
I am your fallen one,
I am the sulking one,
still waiting you to pull me to you,
My river wants to fall into you O! Almighty,
I was trying to connect to this material world,
and forgot that this world is no more than dust,
and now i have been turned into mere smoke,
I can not be away from you,
because i have faced the truth,
which you wanted to show me,
and now i am ashamed about myself,
as i ignored you altogether;
I can no longer be away from you,
I forgot about your immaterial being,
And now my dust like form keeps craving for you,
Please forgive me for my insolence my almighty!
As, I don't have anyone other than you!
And, I don't want to be the fallen one anymore!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stefanie Fontker 17 September 2011

Is it not the wish of all, to be the good one, the angel that still has wings? Interesting writing, thanks for the invite.

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Allemagne Roßmann 17 September 2011

Very well written poignant verses with the presence of mind...i liked it

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Jim Troy 17 September 2011

It just don't get any more powerful than this and without a doubt so many of us discover the deeper truths of life if we are lucky, at different junctures of our lives. Thank you for putting it in front of all of our eyes................Jim Troy

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Crimson Love 17 September 2011

This poem was beautifully written....well done :)

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Dave Walker 17 September 2011

Very powerful poem that makes you think. Great job. May i invite you to read my poem Called, oh my love.

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A. Ester 01 December 2011

That is a beautiful poem.

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nacera dansoun 22 September 2011

i like it.it's very beautiful and honest poem; well done

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Crimson Love 20 September 2011

Beautifully written, and very strong words that grip the imagination, I LOVE IT!

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Matt Mooney 19 September 2011

An admonition to stand up and be counted.A poem with substance and shape befitting the high minded theme. A lovely prayer as well.10.

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Ahmed Khaled 17 September 2011

the physical and the metaphysical, the natural and the supernatural, the being and the supreme being, the relative and the absolute, , all, , would have got no difference with the light and shadow couple, since every single can not be detected without the other single, it's scientific in sense, and great in content, the meaning sometimes could be the one who dominates the situation, i think that's exactly what was to do with your wise writing in this impressive piece of writing, , yours ///a\\\k///ph.d...

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