Fallen Poem by Renee Maritz

Fallen

Rating: 4.0


The first time I saw you, I did not quite understand…
When you said that you were not from this land
You were nothing like I've ever seen
At first I thought you were just a dream

Wings like winter wonders - touch like lightning bolts
Eyes deep like midnight blue - sparkling ever so true

Style and grace with the most handsome face
Always taking me in your warm embrace
You know all of life's secrets and yet you will not tell
- If you do your soul gets dragged to Hell

Everyone and everything are always against our love
But then again it's because you are a blessing from above
So I'll keep fighting till the very end
Because you're my love - my angel - you are my best friend

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Fallen Angel - Forbidden Love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
White Tiger 14 March 2018

Beautifully written with very nice imagery. Well done. 10+++

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 June 2016

Everyone and everything are always against our love But then again it's because you are a blessing from above So I'll keep fighting till the very end Because you're my love - my angel - you are my best friend - - -the last stanza is a crowning of the poem...... stand firm, in determination.... firm like a rock to be in love with the one who touches your heart........ love your poem. tony

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 December 2012

An interestin poetic love poem. Kudos for a unique way of presenting it. Do read my latest too. :)

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 08 December 2012

its a beautiful love poem......... good poetic heart.. read mine.... i will give you a vote..

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