Fall -Tanka- Poem by ray Schreiber
Fall -Tanka-
Rating: ★5.0
bright brittle bodies
fall away down to the ground
with brilliant colors
crazy patchwork quilting bee
warming roots for next year's leaves
Tuesday, October 20, 2009
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Lillian Thomas
20 October 2009
Usually I don't like rhyming in the Japanese forms, but I think it works here. Very nice tanka.
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4/16/2024 2:55:59 PM # 1.0.0.1119
One of fall's many mysterious and interesting patterns. Beautifully done.