(fall) -Haiku- Poem by ray Schreiber

(fall) -Haiku-

Rating: 2.6


November's blue sky
yellow leaves across dark trees
freckles on her back

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 02 November 2009

Freckles can be some thing

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Paul Judges 11 February 2011

Well written, Ray

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Walterrean Salley 25 December 2009

What a masterpiece. Nature is a wonderful artist. And I love the way she has coordinated her colors: blue for the sky, yellow for the leaves, something dark for the trees, and just a touch of freckles. Great job. 10

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thank you for visiting my chain.. im going to bug you. good piece.

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Rachel Butler 08 November 2009

'Yellow leaves across dark trees' Rachel Ann Butler

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Maria Barbara Korynt 04 November 2009

Very good and with the meaning :) Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt

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ray Schreiber

ray Schreiber

Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania USA
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