Fall Anew Poem by Rutvi Padhy

Fall Anew

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Just a little drop,
Yet you make me smile,
Soft, cold,
Yet I feel alive.

Stay,
Keep falling,
Trickle down my skin,
I can stand,
Watch forever,
Breathe and let my worries sink.

I really wonder,
I awe,
How do you make me feel myself?
In just a few seconds,
Just a few spells.

And yet you bring me peace,
Your drops, they heal my wounds,
Rain, I owe you life,
So fall,
Fall anew.

Sunday, April 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: rain drops
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terrance Mawanga 01 May 2015

Your poem is slendid. This a beautiful piece indeed. Keep up the poetic spirit.

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Rutvi Padhy 01 May 2015

Thnx for reading: -D

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Geoffrey Fafard 30 April 2015

Firstly in readable poetry you need imagery to involve me the reader. Secondly, I feel, you need a subject not flogged and seen from a different perspective and lastly if you make the reader want to read it a second time.then you have a successful formula. Miss Padhi you succeed in all of these points. Love this story.Keep writing please.

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Rutvi Padhy 30 April 2015

Thnk u for reading my work and for your encouraging words. They really mean a lot to me. I'll always keep those points in my mind while writing in the future. Thnx again: -) : -D

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