Failure Poem by Lucifera Santez

Failure

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I don’t know why do you cry?
Accept failure before you try,
Try to hide as you die inside,
Don’t let the tears fall from your eyes.

You want to be strong I know,
To bear the sting as your losses grow,
To hear the taunts as they bait you,
Forgetting they have failed too.

So don’t just paste a smile on your face,
When your heart in throbbing within,
Success comes from disappointments,
To show you failed is not a sin……………………

Sunday, May 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i wrote it to kinda motivate my sister after she got a B in a paper.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 26 June 2014

After a long time I am reading your poems this morning. This latest one of yours is a beautiful piece. I liked the inherent inspiration, and I liked the rhyme too. The note makes the poem all the more beautiful. I have no doubt, your sister must have felt greatly inspired and motivated by this poem. 'To show you failed is not a sin...' - Oh! What a great piece of motivation!

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 14 June 2014

beautiful and strong, this is an awesome poem so the rhyme too love it so much

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Gajanan Mishra 25 May 2014

very very beautiful, I love it, thanks.

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