***************facets Of A Night******************** Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

***************facets Of A Night********************

Rating: 3.4


Between that sweet taste and your name in her mouth

few moments there were.

The days do not complete..

they are followed by the darkest nights..

hotness of summer followed by drought of fall.

a glance to the moon we could have..

yet before we taste any trance in a waiting night..

the beats' rhymes will be broken by the sun's light...........

a changable creatures we are...they are..

each has his reasobanle and un reasonable seasons..

each has his stages of his ages...

The cosmos lacks stability...

that internal..the external state

are exposed to the windy stromy nights...

In the poets' universe each face has many other facets................

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammed Hassan 27 October 2009

it's a real work and you chimed the bell of the truth about that world In the poets' universe each face has many other facets......... you deserve it 10 and even more

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Louis Rams 27 October 2009

in the poets universe each face has many facets that tells it all! gr888888t write a ten

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Marieta Maglas 27 October 2009

wonderful meditative poem, very well written 10 ++++++++++

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Seema Aarella 28 October 2009

Oh wow! ! ! ! ! ...excellent lines...last one beats 'em all...! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Ying Escalona 28 October 2009

facets of a night sides of a circle... 'outside and inside'

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Heather Wilkins 08 July 2013

very touching and thoughtful poem.

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Chisomo Kumwanje 07 January 2013

Nice poem with unique diction. Read my poems.. Chisomo Kumwanje...

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Antonio Liao 24 October 2012

A DARING STUNT OF REALITY, EXCELLENT IN THE EDGES OF TIME AND POETRY....THE WORLD HAS TO READ THIS KIND OF THOUGHT...10/10

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Sadiqullah Khan 18 March 2010

I have to go through ages in these pages to see what I have written before, if any, Some times it does not matter what is written, what matters is that who has written. You are that (who) here. Add 10 more.

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Sadiqullah Khan 18 March 2010

I have to go through ages in these pages to see what I have written before, if any, Some times it does not matter what is written, what matters is that who has written. You are that (who) here. Add 10 more.

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