Faceless Face Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Faceless Face

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Facilitation is being made in a train journey,
Faceless face we fetch that gives pleasure or agony.
Facial action indicates the thoughts of heart,
Face is mirror of heart, it shows murk or smart.

Fad of today fades in front of spiritual person,
Failing is not so easy he or she can cushion.
Falsity he or she dislikes always like to truth,
Fear can’t frighten, he or she does in smooth.

Fearfulness is known from a beautiful face,
Fearlessness can be increased in spiritual race.
Feasibility of noble works can change a mind,
Faceless face may accept these or may be kind.

Feeling one’s problems we can solve these,
Felicity will be gained they may live on ease.
Female or male all are equal souls,
Father God is in above he is supreme soul.

Fermentation is sure for our flesh bloody body,
Ferocious calamities may come we should be ready.
Fervently we should meditate and burn our sin,
Faceless faces will be dearer their heart we can win.

Fight should be ignored peace should be accepted,
Filth should be given up morality should be adopted.
Finalization of life is coming soon and soon,
Fairly we should pray God to receive his boon.

Monday, June 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poet’s Note about the Poem
Poet says that in train journey there are many facilities and a traveler has to fetch many unknown face. From face some person can be identified as he or she is honest or dishonest as face is the mirror of the heart. Now a day people are in temporary fashion which withers soon. Truth is always fresh which can change the mind to do noble work. If we solve others problems we get felicity or great pleasure. Female or male all souls are equal. Fermentation is certain for human body. Ferocious calamities may come very soon, so we should meditate and burn our sins. We should not fight among us. Filth should be given up. We must prepare for future by praying God. This is the theme of the poem in nutshell. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and is dedicated to the people of the world.
Glossary
Faceless – without identity, Fad – temporary fashion, fade – wither, felicity – great happiness, fermentation act of process of fermenting, ferocious – fierce, fervently zealously, filth – obscenity.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 01 June 2015

F'n good poem my friend. (that slang is funny in the states) As always, a marvelous bit of philosophy. Thanks

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Queeny Gona 02 June 2015

Philosophical read Sir. I liked the way poem has been rendered to convey the message in modest way!

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Valsa George 07 June 2015

Fight should be ignored peace should be accepted, Filth should be given up morality should be adopted. Finalization of life is coming soon and soon, Fairly we should pray God to receive his boon.............Yes, war and cruelty should be abandoned and peace should be embraced..... Our life on Earth is not to last for ever. The inevitable end will come...! We should store enough imperishable wealth while living to make us worthy of God's kingdom and its bliss!

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 June 2015

A Beautiful poem with philosophical touch guiding our life towards a beautiful journey. Very true said, we must prepare for future by praying God. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 July 2019

Full of philosophy of life. In a train journey we meet faceless faces, unknown, but by the time we or they get down the faces are quite familiar. A newly born also meets with faceless faces in the same way.

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Pushpendra Patel 12 February 2019

Fearfulness is known from a beautiful face. A person should remain fearless. You are very right sir. This poem started with F has nice effect.

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Simone Inez Harriman 01 October 2017

This poem is truly noble works. A feast of guidance for spiritual enlightenment presented with clever use of alliteration.10+

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Hazel Durham 20 December 2016

To be kind in a world that can be cruel is a blessing of God's guidance to leave a trail of compassion and love for peace will be our reward. Brilliant write and love the title of the poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 June 2015

Finalization of life is coming soon! So, let us all be straight and live in peace.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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