Face Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

Face

Rating: 5.0


iam not the sun
iam not the moon
iam not the wind

dont expect me to be
just the same
i do expect a return

atleast a thanks
atleast a smile
from all of you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kalyani Rajalingham 26 April 2009

For your lovely words alone, you deserve every smile!

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rago rago 26 April 2009

yes you are true. Even do without any cause/without expecting returns nowadays fails.........ole ole ole

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Louis Rams 26 April 2009

the return depends solely on you

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Miriam Maia Padua 27 April 2009

indeed...you deserve a smile... a wonderful return of a new Sam? great thoughts...meaningful 10+++

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Anjali Sinha 29 April 2009

a lovely poem surely -10 anjali

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Antonio Liao 03 May 2009

a poem that express and showed humanity...a true and a picture of human weaknesses...thank you and God bless

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Sandra Martyres 01 May 2009

You definitely merit a smile Samanayan...very nice verse but I agree with Sandra you sound a bit sad and vulnerable....an unconditional 10 from me

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Sandra Fowler 30 April 2009

Very touching and a bit vulnerable. A warm smile is a gift which should be unconditional.10, for you with a smile. Kind regards, Sandra

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Deepti Agarwal 30 April 2009

sweet and true agaony.... here comes a smile for u.. :) read mine 'Am A Sun'

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Naidz Ladia 29 April 2009

expect one from me sam..

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