F: Dishwashing Competition Poem by Margaret Alice

F: Dishwashing Competition

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For me it’s a meditation
I do it slowly, lovingly
crying if I need to
or singing softly

But when Hans and Thea
come visiting dishwashing
becomes a competition, how fast
how many, in how short a time

In and out of the basin
in one sweeping movement
no time for quiet contemplation
I have to compete or be left behind

Forget silent action, sweet dedication
to thorough peacefulness,
my innocuous alienation - an escape
from too many people -

Is taken from me!
I rack my brains to
offer amiable conversation
without touching upon

The sweet elation
of the unknown
and strange
mystery…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Francesca Johnson 28 April 2007

I've never looked at dishwashing as anything other than a distasteful chore. Maybe I should do it meditatively, like you do, slowly and with feeling? Nah, I'll use the dishwasher! Love, Fran xx

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Derrick Clark 28 April 2007

that was a creative topic. it sound good to me.

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Madly In Love 28 April 2007

Amazing poem Margaret

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