Eyes Will Tell Poem by louis rams

Eyes Will Tell

Rating: 5.0


without your love my dearest i would surely die
for when we met my feelings started to rise.
they started at a slow but steady pace
and then they took off; running their own kind of race.

i know that you felt what i was feeling too!
by the way your eyes looked at me.
our eyes interlocked and the feelings started to grow.
much more than you could or will ever know.

you tried to take your look away from me
just so that my eyes could'nt see.
that blushing glow, was because of what?
you felt it deep inside
were you feeling something dear?
of what your eyes were unable to hide?

now when we look into each others eyes
all we could see is the depth of love inside.

eyes will tell all of your hopes and dreams
of those deep and hidden things unseen.

you can see disappointment, sadness and anger
and all of your hidden rest.
but just look into your loved ones eyes
and it will put all of your feelings to the test.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 01 January 2009

Very touching. It is said that eyes are the windows of the soul.10 for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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for when we met my feelings started to rise. they started at a slow but steady pace and then they took off; running their own kind of race. no words will be needed when eyes speak....10 read mine two eyes... brown eyes and anywhere

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Kranthi Pothineni 17 March 2009

Lovely and true...good work

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a real sweet one translating what the eyes spoke

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So sweet and nice...

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Sarah Sisson 08 January 2009

I love that! ! ! so sweet! ! ! well done friend!

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