! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! **eyes Half Veiled***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! **eyes Half Veiled***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.9


As the symphony reels through
on rungs of colors by dappled skin
rainbow sneaks into vibes of blue
eyes seems to bestirs by green of wild
wave cascades to touch onshore.

rapture oscillates in vale of tune
by the octets of flute betiding
across the jingles of Florence
beneath musky mango grove
Oh it is incoming of spring virile.!

heart encores in tunes of rhythm
who knows quantum grin within
when wine ramifies through vein
I do remember murky eyes half veiled
at the thresh hold of my doorway.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Gogeshvili 14 March 2010

Hi, subhendu, -Beautifully... Moods of spring corresponds through fine eyes...10... All the best, Tsira

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Pradyumna Jyotir 14 March 2010

Hello Sir.....Spring has been poeticized so beautifully here as also the pair of those lovely eyes....short....sweet and eloquent.

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Pradyumna Jyotir 14 March 2010

Hello Sir.... Spring has inspired so many poets and poems......and once again your poem is a fitting tribute to this season of paradise.its beautiful.....thank you for sharing..... Sridevi.

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Pradyumna Jyotir 14 March 2010

sir......this poem of eternal beauty has been so wonderfully poticized here....thanks for sharing....

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Sahar Sahar 14 March 2010

all tge emptiness of universe is filled with rhythmic dances of colores and notes of love songs, and heart felt emotions knock at your door, and you awaken in love standing before you...........i am listening Ravi Shastri with his magical flute and string and writing masnavi with quill

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Elena Sandu 07 January 2012

What could somebody do but mark with a humble ten a shining gem! Thank you! !

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Your poetic language is so rich, full of poetic wealth! This is such a beautiful read! You truly inspire! ; D

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Sreekala Sukumaran 21 June 2010

Wow a very beautiful piece of poetry...enjoyed it so much..10+++.thanks for sharing...

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Ratnaprabha Raykar 10 April 2010

'getting drugged by music' i often wondered1 but now i know, a wonderful piece of poetry..your poetry too puts one in a trance

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Joseph Moore 23 March 2010

A good poem always makes you read it more than once, so that you can completly understand it. This poem in particular made me think, and that is what poetry is about.

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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