Eyes Full Of Tears Poem by Aarif Ameen

Eyes Full Of Tears

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02 March 2009
Eyes Full of Tears

The beauty of my love
Will shine in your heart
The love that I served
Will ring in your nerves

It will fire with time?
Love that is mine
You will demand the same
And will not find again

You will stretch
The moments left
The images in brain
The beauty we gained

Memories will be grown
The faults that ever been
Shall turn into stones
Time will leave you alone

A change in life
People will realize
The love that I did
Was pure and nice

You will see there
The image in clear
In a broken mirror
Eyes full of tears

Eyes full of tears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 24 March 2009

That is life...don't mind but go on to next poem...10+

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ata khan 30 March 2009

'The love that I served Will ring in your nerves' Beautiful The ability to say much without using many words is a gift, use it more. Thanks for sharing 10+

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Good work Aarif.... keep this pen pumpin' shabaash

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Maryam Khan 31 March 2009

hey...this is really sad..wow, i hope this isn't true...very deep..i felt it..it just got to me, vry well written...keep it up~

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Kesav Easwaran 17 September 2009

good work Aarif...lines deeply expressive...10

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Eyes Full of Tears..... no sheeding of tears and it should never roll out from eyes.....beaitiful write dear.. kaka in hindi belt is father's borther. in punjabi it is for small boy.. I, yur grand uncle so kaka is appropriate even in my language... hahahah read mine 'cry not' and comment me back.... reagards and love

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Lady Grace 02 June 2009

this is really a good write., the sequence of lines are properly arranged..beautiful...grace

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 May 2009

Tearsome and nice 10++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2009

mirror is refection of correct things. i hve poem titles'cry not' in this hunter poem

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