Eyes Are Real Poem by Vizard Dhawan

Eyes Are Real



her bold shameful eyes
looks better when she shys
I want to be in her
wishing GOD for it to occur
I live in her eyes
as she dreams I sleep
the two classy eyes
behind the spectacles
I see them
without any obestacles
seeing her eyes
you forget to memorise
thus bold shameful eyes
looks better when she shys

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Masarapu Navyasree 04 December 2012

very nice writing.so sweet

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Masarapu Navyasree 04 December 2012

very nice writing.so sweet

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Indranil Bhaduri 03 December 2012

Fantastic writing...keep it up, need more...

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Kaila George 03 December 2012

Oh this one is so sweet....and what gets me is the fact that you dont care about her glassess as it should be...beauty is held within the eyes of the beholder...hmmm is that right...smiles...loved this one

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Hazel Durham 03 December 2012

Nice poem, if you don't mind me saying you would need to spend more time editing your poem, very promising!

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