Eyes Poem by Brittney Miller

It's a nice poem, the title is eye catching. Eyes can be read like a book by a poet, as you have done. The opening line is a clear statement from deep observation, I liked it.

Ya.eyes r tunnels to the soul.but where does souls lie dear poet.

I like the way you tell this. It has direction in what you say. You might want to put a space between arefull-and change 'bat' to but. It will read alot more smoother. Hope you don't mind me reading your work and suggesting fixes? Sorry, it's bad habit. :) Deborah Cromer