Eyes Poem by Prakash Subedi

Eyes

Rating: 3.8


I
opened my eyes
and
looked at the world.

I
closed my eyes
and
saw it.

Thursday, July 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: eyes,insight,perception,perspective
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 09 August 2015

I believe the mind sees much better when eyes are shut. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Prakash Subedi 11 August 2015

Thanks, Chinedu.

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Allotey Abossey 31 July 2015

The eye is really not the memory of things but the mind. The mind can see beyond which the eyes can. Those who see only with the eye are limited but there's no limit to which the mind can see. Very deep poem

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Prakash Subedi 04 August 2015

Thank you, Allotey!

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Kelly Kurt 30 July 2015

Yes, visual sensory input is raw and the analysis of the mind is fills in. Thanks for sharing, Prakash Peace

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Prakash Subedi 04 August 2015

Thanks, Kelly!

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