Indranil Bhaduri

Rookie - 121 Points (Kolkata, India)

Eyes


Your eyes are still the same,
They speak to me in soft whispers,
As they used to do, long ago..
I can once again, view the dreams
Pictured on them,
And my heart wishes to name
One for emotion and the other for eternity.
I still long for the solitary river
With its rippling waters
And the glowing sunshine making me wet
With passion ignited,
And thus, drown into the fantasy unlimited.
You know, it's not a delusion..
It's the truth that prevails allover,
And thereby I express my lust for you..
Wishing to softly kiss your tender lips
And explore through the unspoken words
Of your eyes, on and on…
I can touch the vibrant rainbow around me.
And suddenly, the splashes of vibgyor,
Gets me fully drenched with delight.
Thus, my once broken heart sinks again,
Into those fascinating eyes of yours,
And I find my new self, loving you once more!

Copyright © 2012 Indranil Bhaduri

Submitted: Saturday, August 04, 2012
Edited: Monday, August 18, 2014

Topic of this poem: love


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  • Gold Star - 11,841 Points Ramesh Rai (8/4/2013 11:10:00 PM)

    I can touch the vibrant rainbow around me.
    And suddenly, the splashes of vibgyor,
    what a beautiful write. well expression.
    thnx for sharing. best wishes always. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,894 Points Patricia Grantham (7/25/2013 3:38:00 PM)

    Those fascinating eyes caught my attention, it really stood out. The eyes can
    tell a lot about a person. If they are sad, happy, mad, loving, tender or passionate.
    When eyes meet a sparks of emotions can ignite immediately. That is why some
    people men or women walk with their heads bowed as to not have eye contact.
    The eyes have it. An excellent write Adheez. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bob Brown (12/30/2012 10:04:00 PM)

    Ahh, so deeply romantic. Superb, my dear poet! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 28 Points Rumi Roy (11/27/2012 5:41:00 AM)

    A blend of romance and imagery visualised and making us mesmerised. Great one. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,543 Points * Sunprincess * (9/22/2012 4:15:00 PM)

    full of romance..excellent.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 157 Points Meena Mustafa (8/17/2012 2:42:00 PM)

    I am speechess! such a beautiful write :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anita Sehgal (8/17/2012 12:04:00 AM)

    well expressed... creates a subtle atmosphere of love and longing. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,407 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (8/7/2012 8:08:00 AM)

    Beautiful. Thoughts are quiet easy to catch the words. Soft and lucid. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,268 Points Neela Nath (8/4/2012 9:40:00 PM)

    Truly romantic.Here is a tenderness in expression like classic poets. Loved this job. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,462 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (8/4/2012 2:24:00 AM)

    Impassioned, touch-heart penning, Indranil. Smooth, crisp structural movement has this work gliding like a shiny new coin tossed across a freshly glaced icepond ~Solid penning ~FjR~ (Report) Reply

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