Eyes Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

Eyes

Rating: 4.8


The eyes are here
The pearls are here
My love is here
Black lines
Artificial pencil
Your feathers
On your marbles
Love you jaanu.

I get captured
Find myself in it
Striking stares
Stares I swear
It makes me yours
When I see your eyes
lord I feel that
My eyes are not here.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wang Qian 03 June 2011

Beautiful poem~ simply but delicately written, great work ~ Eyes are the windows of one's soul, you color the windows nicely!

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Jahrae Patterson 12 June 2011

You express hypnotism nicely from the view of one hypnotized....

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Raghvendra K 23 December 2011

good lines written which brings out the love u ve on the person whom u ve in ur mind.

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Divya Divya B 24 November 2011

good writing on eyes of your s and your lover s10

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lover of poetry sweet 13 October 2011

this poem reminds me of my love sir

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Amy Marie 17 June 2011

I love the nice short style :)

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Arfa Iris 13 June 2011

good poem......keep going..

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